Prole Pamphlet Competition, 2018

Prole Pamphlet Competition, 2018

 

The results are in!

 

With many thanks to Mab Jones for judging this year's Pamphlet competition, we can now announce the winner. Her response to the winning pamphlet and commendations are below. All entries were judged 'blind'.

 

Many congratulations to Luke Palmer with Spring in the Hospital who is this year's worthy winner. Spring in the Hospital can be purchased from our home page, here.

 

Mab chose two pamphlet entries to commend:

My Hotel by Scott Elder

True by Paul Jeffcutt

I'm sure these will find success elsewhere.

 

Judge's comments

 

Winner

 

Spring in the Hospital

 

After reading all entries, re-reading, reading again, sifting, re-reading, making notes on a spreadsheet, re-reading, drawing up a longlist, re-reading, drawing up a shortlist, reading again, making notes, and then drawing up a even shorter shortlist, which I read and re-read until my head ached, coming to a final decision was extremely difficult. In the end, Spring in the Hospital won out, for a number of reasons. Firstly, it was extremely cohesive, the poems exploring a particular subject / setting (illness / disease / hospital), and this gave the pamphlet as a whole much depth and resonance. Although I’m not a stickler for the idea that pamphlets must always do so, some other submissions suffered from their lack of, at the very least, thematic coherence, jumping from theme to theme, subject to subject, with a variety of different styles and voices, so that the end effect was of a collection of ‘poems leftover from other projects’. Here, the feeling was that the writer journeyed across a certain landscape, stopping here and there to examine things in closer detail before continuing, with the over result that the reader (I) was pulled along, and purused those particular items, with them.

 

Secondly, the poems were very well formed, with an excellent mix of the graphic and florid, and a sublime use of space / breath / caesura. Each piece drew me in and left me, afterwards, with something - an astounding image, a feeling of shock, a heart-punch, a wondering or questioning. I not only felt totally engaged, but punched here, cwtched there, made to mull on this, made to query that, until the very end with that wonderful snow image which came back to me again and again. A really powerful, yet remarkably light and readable, series of poems. I read it many times and the poems remained sharp, succinct, intelligent and interesting, whilst also offering up something new each time. Springtime in the Hospital is a profoundly accomplished poetry pamphlet, in my opinion.

 

Commended

 

My Hotel

 

Again, this was a wonderfully cohesive series of poems, full of depth and intelligence, and with a pleasing amount of quirkiness and wry humour. I particularly enjoyed the variety of form and voice, here, with some poems containing more than one speaker / style of speech, and an interesting use of shape and / or spacing in others. A very well executed, excellently-written series of works.

 

True

 

I really enjoyed the concept behind this pamphlet, which takes the stories behind real objects and historical events / characters as its inspiration. This made for a very original and unpredictable series. I don’t think I have ever read a poem before about frozen fruit cake found in the Antarctic!! Very interesting, very well written, and a delight to read.

 

 

 

These were the details of the pamphlet competition, 2018.

Entry period

We are open to entries from March 1st 2018 to 30th June 2018.

Prize

The winner will receive £100 and 15 copies.

Please be aware, we are active editors and will work with the winner to ensure the pamphlet is the very best it can possibly be.

Judging

Entries will be passed on to Mab who will judge 'blind'. ie/ We'll make sure entries delivered to her are anonymised.

Entry fee

There is a fee of £12 for one entry and £20 for two entries. You can use the PayPal button, below (preferred) or by cheque, made out in GBP only to Phil Robertson.

Sending entries

Please send entries as a Word attachment to submissionspoetry@prolebooks.co.uk and include 'pamphlet' in the submission line and quote your PayPal transaction number - or send by mail to:

Brett Evans

15 Maes-y-Dre

Abergele,

Conwy

Wales

LL22 7HW

Try to avoid using your name on the body of the submission to make it easier for us to make sure entries are sent anonymously.

Winner announced

Thewinner will be announced and the pamphlet launched on October 1st, 2018.

Our Judge

 

Mab Jones is a "unique talent" (The Times) who has read her work all over the UK, in the US, France, Ireland and Japan. She is winner of the John Tripp Spoken Poetry Audience Award, the Word Factory Neil Gaiman Short Story competition, the Aurora Poetry Award, the Rabbit Heart Poetry Film Festival Grand Jury Prize, and the Geoff Stevens Memorial Poetry Prize, amongst others. Her most recent collection, 'take your experience and peel it', is published by Indigo Dreams. Her first collection, 'Poor Queen', was published by Burning Eye Books. She teaches creative writing at Cardiff University, writes for the New York Times, and has presented two poetry programmes on BBC Radio 4 with a further one due later this year. She also coordinates International Dylan Thomas Day.

 

https://mabjones.com/writing/

 

The results

 

The Winner of our first pamphlet competition is Robert Nisbet with Robeson, Fitzgerald and Other Heroes. Many congratulations, Robert - a very worthy winner.

Robert wins £50 and 15 copies.

Robeson, Fitzgerald and Other Heroes will be published in November and available here on our website.

 

Thank you to all who entered. Your support helps us to continue with Prole.

 

Many thanks also to our judge, Fiona Pitt-Kethley, for her professional work.

 

Judge's comments

 

Judging the Prole pamphlet competition proved an enjoyable experience. The good thing about a pamphlet competition, rather than one for an odd poem, is that it sorts out the worst entrants. If you have at least a couple of dozen poems to present, you are beginning to be serious about the business of being a poet.

 

As I narrowed down my list, I felt that there were a dozen or so from decent poets who perhaps had other books or pamphlets out there, or at least a lot of magazine publications. Some sounded as if they were good performers too. In the end, I had to narrow this list even further to provide one actual winner. This wasn´t that easy as there were several I liked.

 

I had started off looking for a pamphlet with a central theme, as this is something I usually prefer. Some of those in the final list had this, others not. Robeson, Fitzgerald and Other Heroes only has a loose theme, but it held up to plenty of rereading so I chose that as the winner. I had the feeling of a good poet crafting poems well on a variety of subjects.

 

I liked People Pie, which, as the title suggests, has quite a cast of characters running through its poems. I especially liked the opening poem of the series.

 

I would also like to give a kind of special commendation to three others for staying very close to their chosen themes. Words from the Water, which has a very Welsh feel and concerns the flooding of valleys to make reservoirs. Lots of anger and sorrow there. Fowl, Wild and Water is a likeable collection of nature poems on birds. Last, but not least, The Sand Gathering Railway is a series of vignettes relating to the the Nazi occupation of Jersey. These are vividly imagined unless the writer is in his late 80s and was there at the time. Rather curious to know if this is the case.

 

I had to make a choice...but I also hope that all these writers get a pamphlet out from one or other press soon. In the case of the two shortest of the above, another poem or several would make the work even better.

 

Winner:

Robeson, Fitzgerald and Other Heroes - Robert Nisbet

Commended:

People Pie - John Ling

Words from the Water - Ellen Davies

Fowl, Wild and Water - Marc Woodward

The Sand Gathering Railway - Alice Allen

Our judge was the excellent Fiona Pitt-Kethley. Fiona is the author of more than 20 books of prose and poetry. She lives in Spain with her family and an adopted colony of feral cats. She is currently writing prose and poetry books on the area. Her hobbies are mineral-collecting, fishing, hillwalking, snorkelling and playing the cajon.

All entries were judged anonymously.

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